Writing

 media type="custom" key="8861030" My class did 1 minute speeches but I didn't do one. Uhm...... we are doing exposition ( persuasive writing). Plan:

I think Greytown School should have curricula activities It would be a good thing Students will like to have this opportunity The year 6 students might wont to stay at our school instead of going to intermediate Better education Fit and healthy students will think our school is fun

Writing:

I think Greytown School should have Extra-Curricula activities as the students will have more opportunity’s to do what they like. Such as people who like acting could take up Drama classes and people who like soccer, Rugby and Tennis could take up Sports and this will keep the students fit,healthy and happy. Doing this could help with education. Parents might like to leave there child here as they think it would be better here than taking there child to another intermediate school because there child will be having loads of fun and extra learning witch increases their abilities. If Greytown School does start to introduce these activities i think there will be more students who will want to come to our school and those people will tell their parents and their parents will tell their friends and they will hopefully think about bringing there child here. Also bringing in these sorts of things will want to make there children happy after and want them to stay here and give these students a feeling of collage is like.  My 4 picture story 03.03.11 - 09.03.11 WALT: Use descriptive adjectives in our writing. TIB: This is because it makes a pictures in our audiences mind.

Hi my name is Boy, I have a fluffy cat named nibbles and a plumped turtle named Brian

One day my family decided they wanted to go to a peaceful relaxing environment away from the city that night when my parents were watching television a add came on saying “ want a relaxing time with your family go to an oasis”.

The next day my parents made there minds up and they wanted to go to the Oasis they came to us and told us “ we are going to a oasis and were going now so get packing” so we went to our rooms to pack we put summer cloths, togs utensils obviously food and water plus a tent to sleep in after we were finished packing we jumped into our ford GT and headed to the oasis it only took a couple of hours you could tell as you could still see some houses in the distance.

When we had arrived we put up our tent put on our togs and headed to the glistening water it gorgeous until we actually got there it had cheerless green fungi suffocating the water.

So we decided to head back to the tent to have a quick sleep because my dad wanted to go for walk and find something else we could eat.

Suddenly i was awoken by my dad “come on girl we have to go before a storm comes” so we walked around and found a tree it had lolly like mushrooms they wet like there had been rain they had been saturated bye rain but there were no rain clouds in sight.

I started to pick the mushrooms when my dad was looking around when h turned around he told me the mushrooms were poisonous and to wash my hands before I eat or else i could die.

So we decided to head back we looked up and a ring started to appear in the sky my dad said “there’s going to be a storm we have to get back quick.

We got back in time for dinner the very next day we went out side to look at the sunset rise “ spectacular isn’t it” dad said then out of know where a dazzling green and yellow baggie holding a spoon appeared “how weird” i thought my dad started to go angry cause the bird had just swiped one of our cutlery.

The very next day dad and mum thought it was time to head home as brain and nibbles might be a bit hungry.

Once we got home I unpacked my bags grab cat food feed nibbles and grabbed the turtle food and feed brain gee when i looked at nibbles before i left he was bulky now he’s as skinny as a stick. Thinking in my head if we were to go on another holiday were would it be to a farm near the beach maybe to grandma’s just maybe.

A couple of months ago we had Swimming sports we had to do a recount on it but i wasn't involved so I did a recount on a camp I went to here is my recount.

__ CAMP ANDERSON __

“Camp here we come” as i was thinking when i was packing my bags excitedly then i got told “are you ready we have to go soon” feeling nervous thinking in my head is Michaela going will i know anybody but still happy and couldn’t wait to get away from my family.

When i got to lake view school i got out the car and i saw nobody i knew except my cousin Piri but he was annoying so i kept away from him. After awhile heaps if people started to arrive i finally saw my two friends Sacha and Michaela then a person turned up with a clipboard and a piece of paper for the parents to sign i got signed i grabbed my bag and put it into the bus and jumped into the bus. I sat in the bus with Sacha and eat away at sweets, chips and drink also giving away silly bands to everyone.

Once we got to camp we were greeted by aunty Tarnz and uncle Steve they told us what cabin we are in my cabin was cabin five when we went in everybody said “ Pooh that stinks” Aunty Tarnz came in and said “ It might stink because we are putting in some toilets so you girls don’t have to go outside” so the girls started to spray cool charm around the room to keep it smelling good.

After that a bell rang everyone ran to line up we went into the hall to talk about rules and what we do in the church hall.

That day we were suppose to go swimming but there were these jelly fish things and the life guards were supposed to come and talk to us about the water.

That night we played christen commences its a night were you get dropped off near the end of the beach but on the road and you have to find your way back. On our way back we stayed together and bundled up so we didn’t have missing people along the way also a lady came out and thought we were getting attacked and were asking why there were dead people “haha” when we got back we had came 4th and cabin six came 1st we weren’t upset as we weren’t thinking about winning.

After that we had worship all of us were dancing to the songs we were all copying the girls at the front and everyone around us and then we had ministry Mr Anderson also known as uncle Paul and aunty joealla was talking to us about god and the armer thing we had to learn about.

When that was finished we had a drink of water and couple of biscuits we played on the tramp in the dark waiting for the bell to ring again.

Once the bell rang we all ran again to line up uncle Steve said “ It is now time for bed and the first cabin asleep will get a zombie chew the next day. Well camp was awesome and i got promoted on the last day of camp to trainee leader.